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Your Blood is Mine.

Two souls entwined by fate.
Similar in spirit,
blinded by hate.

A thirst for revenge unending.
Always bitter,
your retribution pending.

Sins of the past,
never meant for it to last.
The precipice of reconciliation,
my realization.

That you and I aren't so different you see,
but you will never know truly what you mean to me.

Yet this rage is forever seething.
Forever deceiving.
Breathing.

A feeling indescribable.
A craving, undeniable.
It's almost intoxicating,
To see you shaking, watch you quaking.

Your pain, my exhilaration.
Your fear, my salvation.

Unchained demons,
from my depths arisen.
My own asylum.
My eternal prison.

An endless cycle,
of hate and indifference.
Of pleas unheard,
awaiting deliverance.

Never forsaken.
Never to be taken.
The devil's bidding,
unrelenting.

A heart never relinquishing,
always anguishing.
Of an unfinished task.
A murder never come to pass.

No use repenting.
Never sorry, never lamenting.

Now it's time to pay the price.
Cold, silver blade, warm skin to slice.
No one gets away scott free.
No one makes a fool out of me.

To lose my humanity,
I never intended.
An unstable sanity.
My life is suspended.

This is what you do to me,
but you and I aren't so different you see.

They walk a thin line.
Trying to take you will not suffice.
To protect what is mine,
my blood I sacrifice.

Your blood is mine.

You belong to me,
as selfish as can be.
Never wanting to share,
not a drop to spare.

You belong to me,
as selfish as can be
and if you shall never wake,     
your soul still is mine to take.
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A rather dark poem expressing Sideshow Bob's complicated feelings over Bart. Seeing him as a kindred spirit yet despising him at the same time. Lamenting over what could have been, yet blinded by his own thirst for revenge.

Bob also expresses that he would rather die than to have someone else kill Bart before he gets a chance to... knowing that most likely he'll never have the courage or the fortitude to do the task himself.

Sounds vaguely similar to the whole Voldemort/Harry thing. XD

I'm not much into poetry, but I like to give it a try occasionally. In celebration of Halloween!
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Mood: Joy ~wintercoldrose 6 days ago  Hobbyist General Artist
Yes, it something like that - Harry and Tom =)
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:iconsumiresan:
woooo! I love it, usually I don't read he fics but this is awesome !
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*MonacoMac Nov 5, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice to hear that someone likes my attempt at poetry! :D Thank you. I know what you mean; fics are easy to skip over sometimes. Not really because of the quality of the writing, but because of the effort and time expended reading it all. XD
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:iconsumiresan:
Yeah! But I love your poem :D
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*MonacoMac Nov 6, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
:love: Thank you!
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*harrimaniac27 Oct 24, 2011  Professional Traditional Artist
Wow....I don't like this pairing a whole lot, but I think this poem definitely sums up Bob's feelings...brilliantly. It gave me goosebumps....because it was almost as though you were inside the head of a psychopath when you wrote this--in a good way....I guess...if there can be such a thing... ^^;
XD Anyway, to my point: You are a brilliant writer. Whether it be poetry or prose, the things you write are exquisite. Don't you ever stop. XD
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Mood: Joy *MonacoMac Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you, that really means a lot! It is like an exercise of the mind to figure out what makes a psychopath tick. I read that J. K. Rowling had lots of fun writing scenes with Voldemort so I can really relate. When I get angry or annoyed, sometimes it helps to tap into the mind of someone like Bob to release that anger and use it constructively. I think the written word is really much a harsher representation of how angry someone really is since it looks a lot worse when it's written in words.

I wasn't much of a Bob/Bart fan either, but it seems like such a fan favorite. (with slash fans at least) Bob has this sexy/dangerous vibe that really works for him. The age difference is the only problem and is a much different situation than with Burns and Smithers so... In my mind, I age him up a little. :D

The only thing I feel insecure about with my writing is keeping it in complete sentences and knowing the correct punctuation. Half of the time, I just try to give it my best guess where all the commas go and to remember the habits that my English teachers tried to instill in me. (it is a struggle XD) Sometimes, I deliberately write in fragmented sentences even though I know that technically it is wrong. It just sounds right sometimes. I don't read as often as I should so I don't know if that style of writing is common practice or not.
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Very dark and in-character! Nniiiicce! :thumbsup:
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*MonacoMac Oct 24, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you very much! I really tried to feel Bob's rage through the words! I means a lot that you think I kept it in-character!
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This is goood!
it's so dark... I loved it.
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